SAT Writing : Identifying Punctuation Errors: Commas for Introductory or Interrupting Phrases

Study concepts, example questions & explanations for SAT Writing

varsity tutors app store varsity tutors android store varsity tutors amazon store varsity tutors ibooks store

Example Questions

Example Question #271 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Although the studentshad studiedhard they foundthat theanswers to manyof thequestions eludedthem.No error

Possible Answers:

answers to many

No error

questions eluded

hard they found

Although the students

Correct answer:

hard they found

Explanation:

一个介绍性的短语必须分开from the rest of the sentence by comma. Introductory phrases are phrases that provide information about, or modify, the subject of the main clause, but are not essential to the grammatical structure of the sentence. In this sentence, the phrase "Although the students had studied hard" acts as the introductory phrase, so it must be followed by a comma. This makes the correct answer "hard they found."

Example Question #272 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Niko couldn'tunderstandwhy, even thoughhe had beenso good his motherstillwouldn't let himgo over to Jimmy's house.No error

Possible Answers:

Niko couldn't

wouldn't let him

why, even though

No error

so good his mother

Correct answer:

so good his mother

Explanation:

The phrase "even though he had been so good" is a non-essential interrupting phrase. The sentence would still be correct even if it were deleted. Therefore, there must be commas before and after the phrase, which means that the the correct answer is "so good his mother."

Example Question #273 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

BecauseCorrine the formervice president of theclub, had attendedevery singlemeeting, Amandavowed thatshe would dothe same.No error

Possible Answers:

No error

meeting, Amanda

club, had attended

Corrine the former

she would do

Correct answer:

Corrine the former

Explanation:

我n the sentence above, the phrase "the former vice president" is an appositive phrase that renames Corrine. Because commas are required before and after an appositive phrase, "the former vice president" must have commas before it and after it. This means that the correct answer is "Corrine the former."

Example Question #274 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

As luckwouldhave it therewere no openappointments on Kendra'sonlyday offfrom work.No error

Possible Answers:

No error

day off

As luck

appointments on Kendra's

have it there

Correct answer:

have it there

Explanation:

我n this sentence, the phrase "As luck would have it" is an introductory phrase. Because an introductory phrase must be followed by a comma, the sentence should read "As luck would have it, there were no open appointments on Kendra's only day off from work." This makes the correct selection "have it there."

Example Question #275 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Just as the studentshadfeared their teacherpresented them with apop-quiz tomake sure they had completedlast night's readingassignment.No error

Possible Answers:

Just as the students

last night's reading

No error

pop-quiz to

feared their teacher

Correct answer:

feared their teacher

Explanation:

An introductory phrase must always be followed by a comma. In this sentence, the phrase "Just as the students had feared" acts as an introductory phrase, so it must be followed by a comma.

Example Question #276 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

我f you're goingto be staying herelong I mustinsistthat youtreat our employeeswith at least a modicum of respect.No error

Possible Answers:

我f you're going

No error

that you

long I must

with at least a modicum of respect.

Correct answer:

long I must

Explanation:

我n the example sentence "If you're going to be staying here long" is clearly a dependent clause (big clue being the "if") because this clause provides context and precedes the main clause, it is called an introductory clause. The only correct way to punctuate an introductory clause is to add a comma after the last word in the phrase, which in this case is "long."

Example Question #277 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

我f Paula,我曾经最聪明的年轻女性之一met can'tcomprehend whatProfessor Pyg is talking about,我strongly suspect thatno one can.No error

Possible Answers:

我f Paula,

no one can.

met can't

Professor Pyg is talking about,

No error

Correct answer:

met can't

Explanation:

打断短语下属并添加有限公司mation to a sentence, but are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete. Such phrases must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. In the example sentence "one of the smartest young women I have ever met" acts as an interrupting phrase, so the portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "met can't."

Example Question #278 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

米ithridates commonlyknown as thePoison King,was aphenomenal enemyofancient Rome.No error

Possible Answers:

No error

米ithridates commonly

Poison King,

phenomenal enemy

ancient Rome.

Correct answer:

米ithridates commonly

Explanation:

我n the example sentence "commonly known as the Poison King" is a grammatically unnecessary (but contextually useful) phrase that must be separated from the clause it interrupts with commas. The sentence above is missing a comma between "Mithridates" and "commonly." The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct and complete.

Example Question #279 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Pontus, a relativelyrichkingdom ontheBlack Sea isfamous forits extraordinaryplant life.No error

Possible Answers:

No error

kingdom on

Black Sea is

its extraordinary

Pontus, a relatively

Correct answer:

Black Sea is

Explanation:

The fundamental grammatical structure of the example sentence reads, "Pontus is famous for its extraordinary plant life." "Pontus" is the subject, while "is" functions as the verb. So, we know that the words excluded from this fundamental subject-verb-object structure must be an interrupting phrase, and as such must be separated with commas at the beginning and end of the phrase. The example sentence is missing a comma after "Sea."

Example Question #280 :我dentifying Punctuation Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Every morningwhen Kentcomestoschool hehas an apple forhis teacher.No error

Possible Answers:

Every morning

No error

school he

his teacher.

comes

Correct answer:

school he

Explanation:

我ntroductory phrases are subordinate and add information to a sentence. These phrases are not necessary to the sentence being grammatically complete, and thus must be separated from the rest of the sentence by commas. In this sentence "Every morning when Kent comes to school" acts an introductory clause, and must be punctuated with a coma after "school." The portion of the sentence above that needs to be corrected is, "school he"

Learning Tools by Varsity Tutors