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Example Question #2 :Identifying Other Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
The flock of geesethatwe saw yesterday as wewere drivinghome from the swim meetis flyingsouthfor the winter.No error.
No error.
that
for the winter
is flying
were driving
is flying
"That" is the correct relative pronoun to describe a flock of geese. "Were driving" is the correct verb tense. The choice "for the winter" is also correctly phrased. The incorrect answer in this sentence is the verb phrase "is flying. While it agrees in number with the singular subject "a flock of geese," it does not agree with the sentence's timeline. The speaker describes the flock of geese "that we saw yesterday," so this observation takes place in the past. We can't know for sure whether or not the geese are still flying south for the winter when the speaker says his or her statement the day after the observation, so to make the sentence consistent, the verb phrase "is flying" would need to be changed to the past tense: "was flying."
Example Question #3 :Identifying Other Errors
Select the underlined word that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Wecould neverunderstand why Lee and Pollyhad neverbeen to California,asso many oftherefriends lived in the Los Angeles area.No error
No error
had never
could never
as
there
there
The error in this sentence reflects a common misuse of the word "there" (which meansa specific place at a specified distance away) in place of "their" (the possessive form of the pronoun "they"). As the phrase "Lee and Polly" is the antecedent of "they" in this sentence, the correct word to use is "their" rather than "there."
Example Question #4 :Identifying Other Errors
Select the underlined word that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Ialwayswondered how youcould beso comfortable in your bedroom, sinceyouralways piling your laundry up in there.No error.
could be
always
your
No error
in there
your
The given form of the sentence misuses the possessive pronoun "your" in place of the contraction "you're" ("you are"). To correct the sentence, "your" must be changed to "you're."
Example Question #5 :Identifying Other Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Michaelcouldnever understandwhythe childrenwereso tired in the afternoon, since they always hadtherenap every day at noon.No error.
why
No error
there
could
were
there
The sentence contains an incorrect use of the word "there." "Their" should be used as the possessive form of "they."
Example Question #6 :Identifying Other Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
Daisyaskedif shecoulduse your black pen, sinceyourgoing to lunch in afewminutes.No error.
your
asked
could
No error
few
your
The given form of the sentences uses the possessive pronoun form, "your," instead of the correct contraction form, "you're."
Example Question #1 :Identifying Other Errors
Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.
As we droveslowly awayfrom therickety, gray,termite-ridden house, a swarm of tiny animalsexplodefrom the bushtoour left, blocking the path.No error
to
explode
rickety, gray,
No error
slowly away
explode
虽然这一事实“阻塞”是正确的throw some readers off, the narration says that they "drove" away in the past. "Explode" should therefore be in the past tense as well ("exploded").