SAT Writing : Identifying Colon Errors

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Example Question #1 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or words that need to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may not contain an error.

If you want to succeed inDr. Henderson’scourse,you need to do threethings;complete your homework promptly, participate in class discussions, andread the textbook thoroughly.没有错误.

Possible Answers:

course,

, and

没有错误.

things;

Dr. Henderson's

Correct answer:

things;

Explanation:

Because “If you want to succeed in Dr. Henderson’s course, you need to do three things” is an independent clause (a complete sentence that stands on its own), the list that follows it must be preceded by a colon. (Semicolons are used to separate two independent clauses, not an independent clause and a list.) In this sentence, the commas are all used correctly.

Example Question #2 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or words that need to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may not contain an error.

Giventhechoice,which would you ratherdo:have your mother cut your hair or go to asalon?没有错误.

Possible Answers:

do:

Given

choice,

salon?

没有错误.

Correct answer:

do:

Explanation:

Because “have your mother cut your hair or go to a salon” isn’t a list of three or more items, no colon is necessary to introduce it. To correctly punctuate the sentence, you would instead use a comma between “do” and “have.” The question mark and other comma are correctly placed in the sentence.

Example Question #1 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or words that need to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may not contain an error.

I have no ideaif she’scoming to the dance marathon onThursday:last week she sprained her ankle at a ballroomcompetition,and shemay berecovering still.没有错误.

Possible Answers:

may be

if she's

competition,

没有错误.

Thursday:

Correct answer:

Thursday:

Explanation:

Because the first sentence isn’t really introducing the second sentence but is rather a separate thought, a colon isn’t the correct punctuation mark. Instead, a semicolon should be used to separate these two independent clauses.

Example Question #4 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or words that need to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may not contain an error.

The way I seeit,the animal shelter has threeoptions:ask the city for moremoney,举办一个fundraiser,or employ more volunteer workers.没有错误.

Possible Answers:

options:

没有错误.

fundraiser,

it,

money,

Correct answer:

没有错误.

Explanation:

This sentence has no error. The part of the sentence preceding the list is an independent clause (a complete sentence that can stand on its own), so the list is correctly introduced with a colon. Each item in the list is correctly separated with a comma, and the introductory clause (“The way I see it”) is correctly set off from the main clause (“the animal shelter has three options”) with another comma.

Example Question #5 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or words that need to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may not contain an error.

It’s a pity you can’t come to theparty,since we need so muchhelp:decorating,setting up seating, andpreparing food.没有错误.

Possible Answers:

decorating,

没有错误.

party,

help:

, and

Correct answer:

help:

Explanation:

Here, the colon is incorrectly splitting up a clause. You wouldn’t say “we need so much help: decorating.” Instead, you’d say “we need so much help decorating.” For the same reason, you also wouldn’t break up the longer sentence, even though it ends with a list. Elsewhere, the commas are correctly separating the items in the list and separating the main clause (“It’s a pity you can’t come to the party”) from the dependent clause (“since we need so much help decorating, setting up seating, and preparing food.”)

Example Question #6 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or words that need to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences may not contain an error.

I have no idea ifshe’drather:have dinner at an elegant restaurant, go to a comedy club, orcompete in a triviachallenge tocelebrate our anniversary.没有错误.

Possible Answers:

she'd

, or

challenge to

rather:

没有错误.

Correct answer:

rather:

Explanation:

Because “I have no idea if she’d rather” isn’t an independent clause (a complete sentence that can stand on its own), the list that follows it should not be separated with a colon or with any other punctuation. You would only use a colon to introduce the list if the part of the sentence before the list was an independent clause. The correct sentence is as follows: "I have no idea ifshe’dratherhave dinner at an elegant restaurant, go to a comedy club, orcompete in a triviachallenge tocelebrate our anniversary."

Example Question #7 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Henryhas facedsignificant personal losses thisyear:Hisgrandmotherdied,his dog was hit by a car, and his identity was stolen by a Bulgarian hacker.没有错误

Possible Answers:

His

year:

没有错误

has faced

died,

Correct answer:

His

Explanation:

Here, the colon is the correct punctuation to separate the first part of the sentence (an independent clause) from the second part of the sentence (a three-item list); however, the "His" that immediately follows the colon should not be capitalized.

Example Question #8 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

Leilawas convincedthat her new boyfriend was the man she would somedaymarry:however,when he showed up late for three datesin a row,she began to have second thoughts.没有错误

Possible Answers:

in a row,

marry:

was convinced

however,

没有错误

Correct answer:

marry:

Explanation:

A semicolon, not a colon, is needed to separate the two independent clauses in this sentence. Colons are only used to introduce lists, and the second part of the sentence is not a list; it’s a full sentence in its own right. Therefore, a semicolon is the correct punctuation mark to use between “marry” and “however.”

Example Question #9 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

“I’venever:seensuch a beautiful night,had such a deliciousdinner, ordanced with such a gracefulman,”Lily said.没有错误

Possible Answers:

never:

such a beautiful night,

没有错误.

man,"

dinner, or

Correct answer:

never:

Explanation:

Because “I’ve never” isn’t an independent clause (a complete sentence that can stand on its own), the list that follows it should not be separated with a colon or with any other punctuation. You would only use a colon to introduce a list if the part of the sentence before the list was an independent clause.

Example Question #10 :Identifying Colon Errors

Select the underlined word or phrase that needs to be changed to make the sentence correct. Some sentences contain no error at all.

It’s been along,hardwinter:everyone inthe Alaskanvillage just wants to see some green grass and feel the sunshiningagain.没有错误

Possible Answers:

shining

没有错误

winter:

the Alaskan

long,

Correct answer:

winter:

Explanation:

Since the first sentence isn’t introducing the second sentence but is rather a separate thought, a colon isn’t the correct punctuation mark to use. Instead, a semicolon should be used to separate these two independent clauses.

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